Mission On Mars

 Kia Ora!

Today I did this writing piece called ' Mission On Mars' and it's about a leader who always wants things to go his way, when they don't actually work.

If you could, would you live on Mars?

Cautiously, the astronauts landed on the fiery red dust of MARS. Everyone was excited for being the first people on Mars, and they were going to climb Olympus Mon!

Willow looked at the others, she was the second youngest, and she always was worried when she went on crazy missions like this.

“ Stop being such a baby, Willow. You chose to come with us, and now you stay with us!” Snapped her leader, Rob Durstone.

“ I want everyone to be as brave as they can, and if you want to stay here, in the shuttle, you can,

but you WON’T become famous, GOT IT?!” 

There were a couple of mumbles, but most of them wanted to be famous.

“ Um, excuse me, Rob! Can I stay in the shuttle? I. . . Can keep it safe!” Mumbled the youngest, Tommy Keet.

Rob stared at him in surprise.

“ Someone doesn’t want to be famous, eh? Stand up straight!

No dinner for you for being a BIGGER baby than Willow!” Snapped Rob.

Tommy stood up straight, shaking like a baby deer. 

“ Sorry, sir! I just. . . Wanted to help!” Gulped Tommy. 

Rob’s face turned red with fury. Everyone stepped back except Tommy. 

“ Helping?! How is that helping?” Rob screeched. 

                   ***

“ Did you climb Olympus Mon? The barcode said that there was an error, and no one had put a flag down”

Asked Catney, one of the computer people.

“ No. . . But we did make it to Mars” Admitted Rob.

Catney looked dumbfounded.

“ Next time, I will let Willow and Tommy be the captains,” Catney sighed.

 “ NO, NO, NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Rob wailed.

“ Don’t be such a baby, Rob. You chose to do this mission now you stay with us!” Fake snapped Willow, laughing.

Rob blushed, then stormed off.

THE END