Friday, 12 November 2021

Write to describe

 Hello!
This is a slide about describing. We had to write about our bird that we chose from the bird of the year.


Can your bird of the year fly? And have you ever seen the bird you chose?

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Maia, thank you for sharing your descriptive writing slide on your blog. I enjoyed reading your list of adjectives, verbs and adverbs as they described the tom tit very well. Well done on fixing up the sentences to make them more interesting by adding detail. I like the adverb you started with as you would need to move stealthily to hide from pray. Can you check your spelling of that adverb, please? Could you also please add you name to the front page?

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    1. Hello Sarah. Thank you for the comment.
      Okay I put my name in, and I checked the spelling.
      What birds do you see the most around your neighborhood?
      Stay safe!

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