Hi Maia, your writing in slide 3 is fantastic, I can see that you have thought carefully about the words. This means that it makes your reading really enjoyable for the reader. Brilliant descriptive writing!!!
Morena Maia, thank you for sharing your writing about volcanoes on your blog. I really like your description of how the fork of lightning left a spiraling hole. What is something new you have learned about volcanoes last week?
Great sentences Maia. You have used nice descriptive words that allow me to picture the volcano in my head (as scary as that is!!)
ReplyDeleteHi Maia, your writing in slide 3 is fantastic, I can see that you have thought carefully about the words. This means that it makes your reading really enjoyable for the reader. Brilliant descriptive writing!!!
ReplyDeleteMorena Maia, thank you for sharing your writing about volcanoes on your blog. I really like your description of how the fork of lightning left a spiraling hole. What is something new you have learned about volcanoes last week?
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