Friday, 6 August 2021

Fingerprint Force!! #2

 Kia orana bloggers

This is the first page of my creative writing, even though I've done four pages and also meet the characters. I did it after I finished some work for free writing. If you haven't seen my other post (two posts ago) it's about three girls who are in a committee called the Fingerprint Force, but then one of the girls, Keira moves to the South island from the North island.







Do you like free writing?

Bye bye!


 

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Maia. I'm excited to read more about the Fingerprint Force. I like your use of descriptive words and lots of dialogue. Maybe you could make the text a bit bigger so it's easier to read.

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  2. Kia ora Maia Liberty here,

    I enjoy reading your story because you use amazing because descriptive words!
    I also like how you have given you reader just a snippet of your amazing story. Overall you have a great story and I really want to see more of this story! Bye!

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